This is the list of things I will improve on.

FINAL PRODUCT

I decided to change the font on my contents page and DPS as I felt that the font I had before did not stand out enough to the reader. I feel that the new font that I selected is bolder and appeals more. It adds something to the page and it makes it appear less bland.
This is my final product.

edited work

This is my updated contents page and front cover. I have moved the cover-lines around so that they are all in line with each other, so that it looks more organised. I have also added a price and date next to the barcode as I had forgot to do that before. I decided to keep everything else pretty much the same as I was happy with it's simple appeal.
With the contents page, I decided to re arrange the images and also improve the quality of the image. I also added some more text so that the reader gets more information when they are reading the contents page. I also included images of social media icons towards the bottom of the page, along with a website.